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The Vampire by ~boomerlover11:iconboomerlover11:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Spoken Word


The night is the time of rebirth
For the creature seen as evil
Though although it has it's faluts
It truly is beautiful
The skin as white as snow
Flashing in the night
Shining in the day
Never aging
Forever staying young
Speed and swiftness
Create a grace
Never stumbling
Glowing eyes
Telling a story
Of many years of rejection
But shining bright with color
And beauty
And wisdom
And lastly the fangs
Hiding in their sheaths
Meant mostly to survive
Not to kill
Used by instinct
Not by will
Such as an animal
Although it is not
This combination
A truly angelic beauty
Turned away
And seen as demonic
When the truth couldn't be more clear
The reality is
The true abnormality
Is the ignorance
That such a beautiful creature
With a reputation tainted
By only a few
Is not welcomed by us
When we should accept it's beauty
And bring it in
For the strangeness
Is a good thing
©2008-2009 ~boomerlover11
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this is actually my english homework :]
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~xVampireGirlxox:iconxVampireGirlxox: Apr 7, 2008, 1:10:50 PM
Very nice job of portraying a vampire. You deserve an A+! :]

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They were perfect, they were beautiful.They met in the middle of nowhere, in the middle of nothing, and kissed where everyone could see.No words. No before.No after. They kissed and it was perfect. It was beautiful. It was everything. It was nothing. -AFI
~theAss-Hole:icontheAss-Hole: Apr 7, 2008, 1:20:33 PM
i'd give you a 17 ;) sweet

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my signature wants to burn your father!
!lostvampiress:iconlostvampiress: Apr 7, 2008, 1:27:10 PM
You deserve a high mark for this, its awesome!

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The darkest of souls are not those which choose to exist within the hell of the abyss, but those which choose to break free from it... and move silently among us..
~boomerlover11:iconboomerlover11: Apr 7, 2008, 1:33:21 PM
thank you love :]

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:sadangel:
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I could spend eternity comparing all my poetry to yours.
~boomerlover11:iconboomerlover11: Apr 7, 2008, 1:33:40 PM
thank you love :]

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:sadangel:
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I could spend eternity comparing all my poetry to yours.
~boomerlover11:iconboomerlover11: Apr 7, 2008, 1:33:55 PM
thank you love :]

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:sadangel:
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I could spend eternity comparing all my poetry to yours.
~xVampireGirlxox:iconxVampireGirlxox: Apr 7, 2008, 1:52:50 PM
You're welcome. :]

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They were perfect, they were beautiful.They met in the middle of nowhere, in the middle of nothing, and kissed where everyone could see.No words. No before.No after. They kissed and it was perfect. It was beautiful. It was everything. It was nothing. -AFI
Mood: Affection ~AkatsukiAme:iconAkatsukiAme: Apr 7, 2008, 4:47:02 PM
Nice, Smurfs! Are you ever going to do my request (you don't have to, I'm just asking)? I really like this poem! ;)

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Don't fix your eyes on a fix you rely on;
Fixed her eyes on a fix she relies upon
~boomerlover11:iconboomerlover11: Apr 7, 2008, 5:16:19 PM
yes i'm working on it you silly goose :]

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:sadangel:
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I could spend eternity comparing all my poetry to yours.
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